Paladin was to be my new ongoing series
for MV1 International. Basically taking this gray-morality soldier-for-hire
and doing a worldwide action-adventure/espionage series. I didn't have
much more than a high concept at this point, but I would definitely have
fleshed out the character more, given him a backstory, but it would have
mostly been a chance to tell Indiana Jones/James Bond-style adventure in
exotic settings. His appearance in Generation X #53-54 convinced me he'd
be ideal for this sort of thing. I still think so, and wish I'd had time
to write it. All I had done was come up with some ideas, exotic locales
and a gimmick, naming each issue after a movie. |
Issue #1 (January Year Five) - "Apocalypse Now" - Stopping a
doomsday cult. Told from the perspective of Paladin and a member of the
organization checking on him. Location: Japan
Issue #2 (February Year Five) - "It Takes a Thief" - Gambit,
Paladin and some other thieves vying for something. Location: Monaco
Issue #3 (March Year Five) - "Dangerous Minds" - A society of
mentally active metahumans is a threat Paladin is hired to deal with. Location:
Switzerland
Issue #4 (April Year Five) - "Born on the Fourth of July" - Paladin
is hired by the government to kill Captain America, whom he is told has
been replaced by an evil agent. Location: America
Issue #5 (May Year Five) - "Enemy of the State" - Paladin is
targeted by the US Government for failing in that assignment. Location:
America
Issue #6 (June Year Five) - "Apt Pupil" - Paladin must deal with
a young protégé of the Taskmaster. Location: Mexico
Issue #7 (July Year Five) - "The Bodyguard" - Protecting someone.
Location: Australia
Issue #8 (August Year Five) - "Army of Darkness" - Rogue American
soldiers causing trouble. Location: Central America
Issue #9 (September Year Five) - "Chinese Ghost Story" - China
and ghosts. Location: China
Issue #10 (October Year Five) - "Heaven's Prisoners" - Trapped
in a VR simulation, Paladin experiences life as he wishes it had been with
his true love. First hints about his past. Location: Scotland
Issue #11 (November Year Five) - "An Affair To Remember"
- Memories of love spurred by his experience with VR, Paladin wants to
see the Wasp. Rivalry with Black Knight over Wasp (sort of) - could make
for an interesting crossover with Crusaders. (Check with Gow and Harris.)
Location: England
Issue #12 (December Year Five) - "A Life Less Ordinary" - Origin
story. Location: America
This book, on the other hand, was to
be written for the Cosmic Adventures branch. It was going to be my magnum
opus, a five year plan that I knew the ending to even when I started writing.
It was going to be epic, crossing the entire Marvel Universe and eventually
having a grand ending. I'm not sure I could have pulled it off, but it
would have been fun to try. This was to be my new creator-owned book after
the Vault ended. |
The Pitch:
There is a prophecy that, translated into nearly any language in the
galaxy, resonates with a group in that race. A prophecy that tells of a
great war in the cosmos, of a turning point in the existence of this universe,
of the battle that will decide whether the universe will exist for ultimate
good...or ultimate evil. The prophecy always tells of a child, born unto
normal parents, who will quickly realize his potential. In some of the
prophecies, the child is the great demon, and must be destroyed before
he rallies the forces of evil to fight the battle. In some, he is the only
hope of the side of light, and must struggle past the forces of darkness
to reach his true destiny. In a few, the child himself must choose, and
as he chooses, so chooses the universe.
The latter is the belief of the Dawning of the Day, a small cult based
in California. Two of the members of this cult have just borne a son, and
as is the custom of the group, have submitted him to test his worthiness
to wear the mantle of the Chosen One.
Imagine their surprise when their leader proclaimed their son the Chosen
One, and announced that he would be taking care of the boy from then on.
Imagine their outrage when the leader told them they must leave the cult
and join a branch in New York, lest their parental influence corrupt the
boy. Imagine the conflict as they struggle to choose beliefs they have
based a life on over what they know to be right.
Imagine that they have taken the boy and set out for New York, believing
that if he is the Chosen One, they should raise him, not a fanatical cult.
Imagine that galaxy-wide, the news of the birth of the Chosen One has
spread, and envoys are coming to Earth to seek the boy. Some to help, some
to harm, some to destroy.
For Todd and Samantha Flynn, the birth of their new child has thrust
them into a wider world, and their journey will take them across the universe
and back.
Characters:
Todd Flynn - Born in Georgia, Todd Flynn was the son of wealthy
parents. His mother stayed home and wrote cookbooks based on her time as
a world-class chef, and his father was a well-known local writer who wrote
a mixture of crime novels and science fiction. His father was active in
the cult, actually being one of the ones who started it, and it eventually
caused his mother to divorce him and take Todd to California, where they
lived comfortably on her salary as the head chef of a trendy restaurant.
Todd attended college and then medical school, studying to become a brain
surgeon. His mother died in a car accident shortly after he graduated,
and he reconciled with his father, eventually being drawn back into the
cult.
Samantha Flynn - A California native, she had a comfortable upbringing
amongst liberal parents. Her mother was the classic housewife, as well
as being a college professor in the area of comparative religions, and
her father worked for an advertising firm as a graphic designer. Her first
exposure to the cult came when her mother brought a member home for lunch,
as research for her college course. Samantha remembered them in college,
and attended a few recruiting sessions. She was a member throughout college,
where she studied astrophysics and engineering, hoping to work in the space
program. She went to work for a California-based company designing cutting
edge spacecraft, and was lucky to be home sick when the Shi'ar launched
their attack on Earth's space program, destroying her place of business.
She traded that life for the life of her mother, teaching college-level
engineering and astrophysics while also preparing for the birth of her
son.
Victor Flynn - Samantha and Todd met through the cult, fell in
love, and married. Despite having attended the same college, they had never
met before. They gave birth to their first child, Victor, on May 1, 2001.
The child will mature quickly, speaking by the time he is six months old
and manifesting unusual powers by the time he is one. He will use his power
to resurrect his mother in the second or third year of the run.
Sharon Hope - Attended school with Victor, and in fact had a
very close romantic relationship with him. He proposed after college, and
she accepted, but when his mother died and he joined the cult, they started
to drift further and further apart until eventually she threw the ring
back at him. This contributed in no small way to her later coldness. Now,
she is one of the few friends he has left who has no ties to the cult,
and she will be drawn into the web to protect the child. She has left Colorado
and moved out to Los Angeles.
Warren Holmes - The cult leader, secretly a member of the Enlightenment
Foundation who wishes to swerve the Chosen One to their cause. Primary
villain, year one.
Bengadi - An alien hunter who has hunted and killed "chosen ones"
on every planet. Secondary villain, year one.
The Prophet - An alien who believes as the Earth cult does and
will assist the protagonists in guiding the child when Samantha is killed
in the close of year one, leading the child to the stars.
Possible Guest Stars
Captain Marvel - Senses the birth of the child because of his
role as cosmic protector. Will help defend him from the Silver Surfer.
Silver Surfer - The Zenn-Lavians believed the Chosen One would
destroy the Universe, and Surfer will be manipulated into attacking the
child
Thanos - Believes the child to be a possible tool, and chooses
to try and "teach" him in year three of the series
Terrax - Conquers a world that will adopt the religion of the
chosen one in year three
Magus - Ignites a holy war against the religion that the chosen
one will inspire in year four
Adam Warlock - Serves as counselor to the boy in year four
The Arc
Year One - Earthbound
Issue One - We are introduced to the Flynns, on the run from
the cult with their newborn baby. They are in a car chase, being pursued
by the cultists. They crash, and flee from the wreckage. After staying
a night under a bridge, Todd suggests going to Sharon for help. With little
choice, they do that. Unfortunately, the cult still remembers Sharon, and
they come after them in her home, leading all three on the run. Sharon
suggests they head to Colorado, where she at least knows people who will
help her. The Bengadi arrives on Earth, as does the Prophet. Thanos, Captain
Marvel, Mephisto and Franklin Richards take notice of the birth of the
Chosen One.
Issue Two - Holmes uses his contacts to send word to the Silver
Surfer that the child has been born, and makes sure he hears about the
evil part of the prophecy. He begins streaking toward Earth to seek out
the Flynns. Meanwhile, the Flynns have a big argument, as the past of Hope
and Todd is revealed.
Issue Three - Silver Surfer comes after them, and Captain Marvel
shows up to defend them. The fight ends when the child telepathically contacts
the Surfer.
Issue Four - The Flynns and Hope stop off at the Vault, seeking
help.
Issue Five - Bengadi attacks, killing Samantha and being driven
off by late arriving Guardsmen. Flynn and Hope decide to move on, unsure
of when Bengadi will come back.
The Flynns will be on the run from their former cult leader, and will
face religious persecution. They will also learn to cope with power, talking
with the Richards about Franklin, and face a hunter from the stars who
has come to kill the chosen one. One issue will feature Mephisto trying
to turn him evil with Daredevil as his protector.
Year Two - Starbound
Taken into space by the prophet, they will begin to realize how big
the prophecy is.
Year Three - Temptation
Turns away from the Prophet, and is taken in by Thanos for the year,
who encourages him to resurrect his mother with the power he has. He uses
his power to destroy a planet.
Year Four - Influence
The religion begins to grow, leading to holy war in the universe.
Year Five - Eden
The Chosen One lands on an alien planet and his philosophy and power
begins to transform it into paradise. |